By Kelly Bridgewater
Marianne Neumann has one goal in
life: to find her lost younger sister, Sophie. When Marianne takes a job as a
placing agent with the Children's Aid Society in 1858 New York, she not only
hopes to give children a better life but seeks to discover whether Sophie ended
up leaving the city on an orphan train.
Andrew Brady, her fellow agent on her first placing trip, is a former schoolteacher who has an easy way with the children--firm but tender and funny. Underneath his handsome charm, though, seems to linger a grief that won't go away--and a secret from his past that he keeps hidden. As the two team up placing orphans amid small railroad towns in Illinois, they find themselves growing ever closer . . . until a shocking tragedy threatens to upend all their work and change one of their lives forever.
Andrew Brady, her fellow agent on her first placing trip, is a former schoolteacher who has an easy way with the children--firm but tender and funny. Underneath his handsome charm, though, seems to linger a grief that won't go away--and a secret from his past that he keeps hidden. As the two team up placing orphans amid small railroad towns in Illinois, they find themselves growing ever closer . . . until a shocking tragedy threatens to upend all their work and change one of their lives forever.
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My Thoughts:
Together Forever
is Jody Hedlund's second full length novel in her orphan train series. With
historical romance, I expect to be taken for a journey through some historical
event or element and follow two characters as they fall in love. With Hedlund's
story, Together Forever, she
definitely does that.
The writing is clear and concise. I had no problem
visualizing the settings and roaming around the countryside with the main
characters and all the orphans. She does allow me to understand and see the
character's different emotions and internal dialogue as they work through
situations.
At the beginning of the story, Hedlund spends a little time
giving backstory. She starts the story with action then explains the life of
the orphans to lead them to their current situation, then she jumps back into a
little action, then repeats the same backstory, a little action, more backstory
before jumping into the forward moving story. This took me out of the story
instantly. Delete the first couple of chapters and weave in the backstory as
they story moves along. Only once.
As for the characters, Marianne and Drew, I really didn't empathize
with either character. The characters you meet at the beginning of the novel
are the same at the end of the novel. No transformation at all. They didn't
learn anything or change at all. They were static characters. Marianne is a
sweet, loving woman who desires to find her missing sister and tries to look
for clues in the opening chapter. But after that, she really doesn't do
anything in the rest of the novel to keep looking for her missing sister. Similarly,
Drew knows how to put enough force to keep the orphans in line, but he also has
a tender heart to show them he loves them.
The romance bothered me the most. Marianne and Drew got
engaged pretty quickly in the book and the sparks fly all over the page,
confusing me and probably Marianne and Drew too. I found their courtship really
unrealistic even though there were a number of obstacles in their way
throughout the rest of the novel.
The historical element of placing orphans outside the city
to learn skills and to be educated is a neat idea. I have never heard of it.
But the way the story was written, I wasn't really interested in what was going
on with the orphans. They didn't appear to be the main part of the novel. The
story centered around Marianne and Drew and their unbelievable romance.
Overall, Together
Forever by Jody Hedlund surrounds a historical element I didn't know
happened. While the synopsis gripped my attention, the plot, characters, and
romance fell short for me. I really had a hard time paying attention and
couldn't wait for the novel to be over with, so I could read something better.
I received a complimentary copy of Together Forever by Jody Hedlund from Bethany House Publishers, but
the opinions stated are all my own.
My Rating:
2.5 out of 5 stars